Mastering the Job Offer Letter: Tips for What to Know, Do and Avoid

December 4, 2023
Mastering the Job Offer

You just had the ideal interview with the perfect candidate. Before you start planning "welcome to the team" parties and printing out a fresh copy of the employee handbook, you'll need to draft and deliver a job offer. We'll look at all the elements of a great job offer and walk you through the process of making one.

In this guide, we'll cover the following:

  • What, exactly, is an offer letter?
  • Creating effective job offers
  • Rescinding job offers considerations
  • Handling mistakes in job offer letters

You're hired! Now what, exactly, is an offer letter?

Offers of employment can be made verbally or in writing, though some jurisdictions require written offers (and giving an offer in writing is a best practice). An offer letter is any written notice informing a candidate that they have been selected for employment. It’s a formal letter from the potential employer that includes the terms and other details of employment.

Job offer letters can vary drastically depending on:

  • Specific industry.
  • The business's stage of growth.
  • The level of the prospective employee.
  • Whether the offer includes equity, bonuses, commissions, etc.
  • Requirements in the jurisdiction.

Creating effective job offers

Before you start, make sure you have a strong understanding of exactly what the position entails, both day-to-day and over time. It's important to give the offer letter the attention it deserves, both from a compliance standpoint and as a first step in onboarding new employees.

What to include in a job offer letter

It all comes down to what is and isn’t relevant to your business and its hiring process. But a few common elements and key details to consider covering include:

  • Conditions. A job offer letter can be conditional, meaning employment will depend on the selected new hire passing certain tests, such as background or drug checks.
  • Salary. Of course, the amount of money your potential employee will be making and pay periods are two things commonly found in offer letters.
  • Benefits. If any combination of health, dental and vision insurance are part of the compensation package, spell them out. Mention any other benefits, like unpaid or paid time off, sick days, vacation time, etc.
  • Equity. Specify whether or not an employee is offered equity and when those shares vest. Vesting of equity is often spread out over several years.
  • Duties. Be sure to clearly define what job responsibilities will be expected of the employee in their new role.
  • Work hours. Explicitly state whether the job is a part-time or full-time position and what hours are expected. Be sure it's clear whether the position is in-office, work-from-home or hybrid.
  • Job location. Specify whether the position is in-office (and if so, where), work-from-home or hybrid and if hybrid, the in-office expectation.
  • Conditional offer. Whether the offer is conditional on the candidate passing a background check for employment history and criminal history.

Sample job offer letter

Are you new to the concept of job offer letters or simply interested in a refresher? Start by reviewing job offer templates and examples that other businesses have used. Ultimately, your offer letter should be individualized based on your business and your needs.

This sample formal job offer letter template offers a good sense of what an offer letter should look like in general:


[Employer name]

[Employer address]

Title: Job Offer from [employer name]

Dear [candidate’s name],

We’re delighted to extend this offer of employment for the position of [job title] with [company name]. Please review the terms and conditions for your anticipated employment with us.

Your starting date and location will be [date] at [exact location]. The starting salary is [dollar amount] per year and is paid on a weekly basis. Direct deposit is available.

[Brief description of benefits] will be provided through our company’s employee benefit plan and will be effective on [date].

[Company name] offers a paid time-off plan which includes [brief description of PTO offered]. Eligibility for the company retirement plan begins [number of days] after your start date.

If you accept this offer, you will report to [manager name].

Please review the attached terms and conditions of your employment should you accept our job offer. We would like to have your response by [date]. Meanwhile, please feel free to contact me or [manager name] via email or phone at [contact details] if you have any questions.

We look forward to having you on our team.


[Your name]



While a job offer email is the 21st-century way to go, you can also mail a paper copy. Either way, keep a print copy of the formal document on file for reference.

How long should a company give a candidate to consider a job offer?

Allowing candidates a full calendar week from the time of the offer to consider it is reasonable, though this can vary depending on the circumstances. Seven days will afford the recipient time to reflect on the position, discuss the offer with family members (if necessary) and make an informed decision.

Still, there are plenty of reasons why this standard might not apply to you and your situation. Be sure to communicate your timeline needs to the candidate when you make the offer. Also consider the candidate's needs. The greater the responsibility, the more time he or she might require.

Rescinding job offer considerations

A job offer, once accepted by a candidate, sets the terms of employment as outlined in the offer letter. However, in "at-will" employment, the default for private, non-unionized employment in nearly all U.S. states, either the employer or the employee can terminate the employment relationship at any time and for any reason, barring illegal discrimination by the employer.

There’s a variety of reasons why employers might rescind a job offer.

For one, a candidate may have lied about important details regarding their qualifications or experience. For example, suppose a prospective employee misrepresents key details of their employment history background. In that case, the candidate usually will have no legal ground to stand on if their offer gets rescinded. Keep in mind if the background misrepresentation is discovered through a search conducted by a third party, the employer must give the employee an opportunity to explain the inconsistency (and the employer must consider the same) before the offer is rescinded.

As a second reason, the employer may have learned of a recent criminal conviction that is relevant to the job’s duties. In many jurisdictions, the employer must then give the candidate a pre-adverse action letter and allow the candidate to explain the conviction and any rehabilitation efforts. Only after an individualized assessment of that explanation and the job’s duties can the employer withdraw its job offer.

What are the reasons not to rescind a job offer?

You can’t rescind an offer for discriminatory reasons, such as race, religion, gender, age or national origin. In many jurisdictions, you can’t rescind a conditional job offer just because a candidate has a criminal conviction unless the circumstances of that crime are related to the job to be performed (as explained above). Whatever the reason for revoking the job offer, you must think carefully before doing it.

What are the steps to take when you must rescind a job offer?

You can dissolve the employment relationship in most states as long as the reason for rescinding the job offer doesn’t break any hiring or employment laws and isn’t related to whistleblowing. You can take these steps when rescinding a job offer:

  • Contact HR. They may also help you find a replacement for the position.
  • Notify the candidate. You should inform them that the job has been rescinded and explain why. Help them avoid wasting time in applying for other jobs that may be available to them.
  • Let them respond. When you rescind a job offer, you should allow the candidate to respond. Let them explain their side of the story and provide information that could change your mind.
  • Give them a chance to correct errors. For example, maybe the candidate made a mistake on their application or during the interview process. Moreover, the candidate’s background check may contain errors. Allow them to correct any errors so you can be sure you are making the best decision for your company. This should be done before the offer is withdrawn.
  • Offer to assist them in finding a new job. If you rescind the position due to something out of your control, offer to help in the job hunt.
  • Review your hiring processes. Look for ways to improve it and avoid situations like this in the future.

Handling mistakes in job offer letters

We’re all human, and mistakes happen. But what if you make a mistake in your job offer letter?

First, open up the lines of communication with the employee, whether or not they have already accepted the job. Remember that post-offer letter changes would seem like sneaky behavior on your part, so you’ll want to be clear that you made a genuine mistake.

Make sure you have some well-documented correspondence with your new hire about the mistake in the offer letter and a clear demonstration that everyone understands the expectations set out in the terms moving forward.

Learn from your mistake and consider giving your future offer letters an extra proofread to make sure they're error-free and save yourself the stress next time around.

Your partner in successful hiring

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Moreover, TriNet's expertise extends to ensuring compliance with ever-evolving employment laws and regulations. With TriNet's support, the journey from job offer to successful hire is thorough, compliant and aligned with organizational goals. Talk with a representative today to learn how your business can benefit from TriNet's vast PEO expertise and experience.

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